Edith's Light
Light flickers with a lingering effect-delicately catches sparkly shimmers in Edith's jewel-tone sequined sweater.An angelic smile illuminatesin pleasant crisscrossed conversationsbetween others...
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Jan, I've known many people with Alzheimer's over the years. You have portrayed this very well. The poem has a lovely soft feel to it.Jan or you can view my personal poetry webpage at Poems For The...
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Oh Janet, this is a lovely, poignant look atthis situation...I know it well.You've captured the moments with gentlerealism...Wonderful work! Lary(I think this is worth sending out...but you mightwant...
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My Lady the one consolation with Alzheimers is the victims do not know. The anguish that is reserved for the carers
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Dear Jan,While observing interactions with my friend and her mom (Edith), I could see the ins and outs of communication during our time together at that table. Edith's spirit was so sweet as she...
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Hello, Lary,I've taken your advice...the bolds are now quietly sitting. Deep down, I felt like I would return to fix that as I chose it to put less emphasis on the last line; however, I don't wish to...
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Hi, poeticpiers,I would tend to agree. Edith looked so very happy to be there with the crowd. My friend has said the memory will fade as Edith will wonder where she went that time.It's sad...and...
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Jan, the italics softens the poem perfectly.Jan or you can view my personal poetry webpage at Poems For The Heart and Soul
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Italics in this poem are very effective.How sad it is to see a mother who once took charge of things come to this.You have crafted this well with sensitivity.
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Kuranui~Thank you for your response to this poem. I appreciate your time.Jan#2 @------------)--)--------
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